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Veldmaat Payments logo Veldmaat Payments · 27 Nov 2025 14:30

Veldmaat's finance and data leads pressed on invoice structure, connector days and discount before the 16 Dec 2025 signature target. Joost Verbeek accepted the discount principle but wants the numbers in one complete draft.

What was said

What this says

As at Fri 9 Oct 2026

Veldmaat's finance and data leads pressed on invoice structure, connector days and discount before the 16 Dec 2025 signature target. Joost Verbeek accepted the discount principle but wants the numbers in one complete draft.

What happened: Tom Ashdown and Owen Tallis walked Joost Verbeek and Ruben Smit through three open points: invoice structure, connector days and the discount. The signature target is Tuesday 16 December 2025.

Customer view: Ruben needs implementation and subscription as separate lines, quarterly invoices, and amounts that match the order form exactly. Joost accepted that the discount covers the first term only.

Commercial: Owen said the executed order form wins over any invoice. The remedy for a late connector was left for Tom to confirm in writing.

Watch: Joost said an incomplete draft would break the one-week legal read. The managing director signs, and the evidence does not show who that is.

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Themes

As at Fri 9 Oct 2026
Theme
Order form negotiation
Importance
neutral
Sentiment
neutral
Voice
champion

Who was there

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Them

Follow-up

Next steps

As at Fri 9 Oct 2026
  • Tom to send one complete revised draft, copying Ruben, by the end of the week.
  • Tom to have finance send Ruben the reverse-charge VAT invoice wording.
  • Tom to confirm in writing what the order form says if a connector is late.

Risks

As at Fri 9 Oct 2026
  • Ruben will not pay any invoice whose amount differs from the order form, so the invoice schedule must match exactly.
  • The remedy if a connector is not live in the committed days was not stated on the call and is owed in writing.
  • A draft that arrives in pieces would break the one-week legal read and the 16 Dec 2025 target.

Opportunities

As at Fri 9 Oct 2026
  • Quarterly subscription invoices with a separate implementation invoice meet Ruben's payment process.
  • Joost accepted the first-term-only discount principle, which leaves the renewal price conversation clear.

Transcript

  1. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown
    Afternoon, everyone. Joost, Ruben, welcome. Owen's with me, you'll have seen his name on the invite.
  2. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Afternoon. Thanks for making the time. Ruben, good to meet you, I know you've the invoices on your desk.
  3. Ruben Smit
    Ruben Smit
    Good afternoon. Yes. I have the draft order form and the invoice schedule. I have a question about the amount.
  4. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Good, we'll get to it. First, just so we're all on the same page. Where does the deal stand against the date? We've got Tuesday 16 December 2025 as the target for signature. Joost, is that still realistic from your side?
  5. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Yes. It is realistic if the open points close this month. There are three. The invoice structure, the connector days, and the discount.
  6. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    That's a clear list. Take them in that order, then. Ruben, what do you see?
  7. Ruben Smit
    Ruben Smit
    Thank you. I see one amount in the draft: fifty-seven thousand pounds. This does not correspond with how we pay. We pay subscriptions quarterly. The implementation is a one-time cost. I need these as separate lines.
  8. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Understood. The fifty-seven is the total for the first year with implementation inside. In the order form it's two things. A one-off implementation fee, and an annual subscription. The invoices will follow that.
  9. Ruben Smit
    Ruben Smit
    So the invoice for the implementation is one invoice. And the subscription is four invoices, one for each quarter.
  10. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown
    If you want it quarterly in advance, yes. Standard's annual up front, but quarterly's no problem. Thirty-day terms on each.
  11. Ruben Smit
    Ruben Smit
    Thirty days is acceptable. Please state on the invoice the reverse-charge VAT. It must be written correctly or I cannot pay.
  12. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Noted. I'll have our finance team confirm the exact wording with you, rather than me guess at it. Tom, can you action that?
  13. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown
    Leave that with me. I'll ask them to send the sample invoice wording straight to Ruben.
  14. Ruben Smit
    Ruben Smit
    Please confirm by return. And one more. The amount on each invoice must be the same as the order form. If it differs, I do not pay. I cannot discuss why.
  15. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    That's exactly right, and I'd say it's the same on our side. The executed order form decides what's invoiced. If an invoice ever disagrees, the order form wins and we correct the invoice.
  16. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Good. That is a sentence I want in the contract. What was agreed was the order form. Not anything else.
  17. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    It's how the MSA works already, Joost, but I'm happy to point to the clause so you can see it.
  18. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Please. Next point. The connector days. Tom, you promised the number.
  19. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown
    I did, and I'm sorry, it's not as tidy as it should be. Hannah's team have given me the days per connector and they're in the latest draft, section three. HubSpot and Zendesk first, then the accounting system. I'll flag it in the email as well.
  20. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    I saw them. They are acceptable. One question. If a connector is not live in those days, what happens?
  21. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Then we've missed a commitment in the order form, and that's our problem to fix. I'd rather not improvise the remedy on a call, so Tom will confirm in writing exactly what the order form says about it.
  22. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Good. In writing. Then the discount.
  23. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Here's where I'll be straight with you. There's room on the first term, within our rules, and Tom will put exactly what I'm allowed to do in the revised draft. After the first term, there's no discount, and I won't suggest otherwise. I don't want us discounting twice and you being surprised at the renewal.
  24. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    That is fair. I prefer it said now. In my experience, the supplier says nothing, and in the second year there is a shock.
  25. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Precisely why I'd rather say it. The price list can also move between now and your renewal, and you'd see that notice well ahead.
  26. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Okay. Then I accept the principle. I need to see the number in the draft.
  27. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Fair. Who signs on your side, by the way? I always ask early.
  28. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Our managing director signs. I recommend, and our legal reads it. I think this will take one week.
  29. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Then what's the next dated step? I'd like the revised draft with you by the end of this week, your legal team reading next week, and signature ahead of the sixteenth. Does that match your calendar?
  30. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    It matches. If the draft is complete. If it comes in pieces, it is not one week.
  31. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown
    One document, one email, everything in it, I promise. And I'll copy Ruben so he's got the invoice schedule at the same time.
  32. Ruben Smit
    Ruben Smit
    Thank you. I will check the amounts against the order form and tell you by return.
  33. Owen Tallis
    Owen Tallis
    Perfect. Thanks, everyone. Tom, keep me posted, and let's not let this sit.
  34. Tom Ashdown
    Tom Ashdown
    Will do. Cheers, all.
  35. Joost Verbeek
    Joost Verbeek
    Thank you. Goodbye.

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